law school application

Hi

I want to you to look at the overall essay, but I want to focus on rewriting the first two paragraph. I think they are too childish, wordy, and not comprehensive. I want it to be more concise and impactive.

I highlighted the things I want to change especially.

Please don’t take it if you didn’t major in writing.

 

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