grammar and punctuation check

i have only one paragraph, i need someone very expert in english writing to check for me if there is any grammar mistakes and punctuation errors and edits it , also i want to check the sentences if its really correct and reformulated . i really need my paragraph attracting to get full mark . also check the style

 
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